Well this has been a long week . I like when someone reads my work and tells me what they see wrong with it . Then I can go back and fix what is wrong with it. I just don't know if I am good at reading other peoples paper . When I started here at Kaplan I had never had to do APA or read someone else paper and tell them what I liked or what was wrong with it. I hope I can be a help to someone else . I am just not so sure of myself when it comes to writing or letting someone know how their paper is. Well I am trying to change what Barb said was wrong with my paper and I thank Rosemarie for what she had to say . hope to see you all in class and good luck on your papers.